Once there was a farmer called Mickey .he lived in a very hot country . He was counting sheep one morning there was 48 sheep there. A few hours later he went to look at them .It was dark .He seen a orange blob.He thought it would have been a fire .He ran but it was a fire What about his sheep They were going to be burned He dint seen his sheep .He rang up the fire stashing .They came very quick .They we’re nearly done The framer said thank you so much. We’re is my sheep he said .I seen no sheep WHAT the farmer said . I seen no sheep .The fire man looked over he said you owns them sheep we’re in that field .There my sheep there very lucky sheep farmer Mickey told all his farmer friends
Good effort
Say “saw” instead of “seen”
Donagh