Tommy: The Basketball Game

I woke up early  on a Thursday morning and my Dad and I got in the car.  We drove to a basketball stadium. When we got into the stadium we took our seats as the game was starting in fifteen minutes.  We went and got some sweets and a few drinks.  I got a coke. We got back before the game had started. But then an elephant came out. Everyone didn’t know what was going on. Then the elephant delivered his speech on how to be successful and after that we finished off the game.

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  1. Kia ora from New Zealand
    Well what a surprise everyone got at the basketball game! Nothing like an elephant coming to talk to the crowd about success! It would have been good if you could have added even more detail about the elephant so the story was less about getting up and getting to the venue.
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    Ms M Team #100WC

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