Rhys: The Woods

After we had found a man to take us to the President but his car broke down in the middle of the woods so we had to camp in the woods. It wasn’t the worst thing we found an abandoned fishing house. Then we decided to camp out there for the night there was fishing rods and bait so we decided to fish. Then we thought we caught a monster but it was a metal box with ready cook meals inside. Suddenly we heard a deafening scream echoed through the night we ran in the house and decided to go to sleep.

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  1. Great excitement in your story! Next time try to think of different words to use for “then”. Did you find out what the deafening scream was from?

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