Martyna: The Marshmallow

“That’s when I new I should run” said Bella. They were telling stories around the fire and roasting marshmallows. Anyways continuing with the story “said Bella “I was running and running until I found a mountain I thought to myself there is no way I could climb that. At that moment I saw a cave that seemed to go through the mountain so I attempted to climb to it. After a few minutes I got to it”said Bella.  One of her friends warned her by saying “be careful or you’ll burn your marshmallow!!”

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  1. Kia ora from New Zealand Martyna.
    That was a pretty funny ending to your story, I really enjoyed the way that the final piece of speech broke the story and changed it completely. It is just the way that things could happen when you are sitting around the campfire. Keep up your good writing practice as much as possible and if you get a chance, come and visit our class blog at https://rakau19.edublogs.org/
    Ms M #100WC

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