Martyna: The Box

When Alaska was walking down the street she saw a box on the side of the road. When she went to investigate it started moving so she went to a near huge Oak tree to find a stick. She went back to the box to open it carefully. When all of a sudden a racoon popped out and ran away. As she continued walking her mum called her ‘Alaska Come Home’ she said. When she came home her mum was sitting on a chair .When she went to her room she looked out the window and saw a beautiful sunset in the sky. She saw the oak tree and a leaf fell down from it.

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  1. Nice build up of tension in your story. Try to think of synonyms for when. Lovely image at the end of your story.

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