Martin: The Bad Night

There was a boy named Harry.Harry was playing hide and seek with his friends.they were hiding in a cornfield. But they didn’t know they were not alone. When Harry was on he counted behind a tree up to 100 seconds his friends were cheating and climbing up trees because they saw something in the field. They didn’t tell Harry when Harry was finding them he saw something in the field then jumped and saw a rat. He jumped again and said aaaaaaaah. The deafening scream echoed through the cold night it was a rat and a big one he ran tho the house and told his mom. To be continued

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  1. Great scary story, I don’t like rats either! Try and keep your sentences short. Looking forward to reading the next part.

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