Filip: Archaeologist

Once upon a time there where 3 archaeology exploring a forest in California. They kept on walking until they saw a narrow cave. One of the archaeologists said let’s go and explore it inside. They went in and saw two chains hanging of the top of the cave it was all in blood. The walls walls where all in ancient writing and suddenly they heard deafening scream echoed through the cold night and ran away. One of the archaeologist said it was a place where the devil sacrificed others. So they took a Ouija board and gave it to a museum.

2 thoughts on “Filip: Archaeologist”

  1. Brilliant story Filip! Use “inverted commas” for the words people speak. I wouldn’t like to be in that forest.

  2. Goodness me, what a chilling tale Filip! Not one to be reading on a dark night for sure. I wonder what inspired you to make your main characters archaeologists – well done on the spelling by the way. It’s always a good idea though to have a quick re-read of your story before posting. Can you spot the word you repeated for example?
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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